Month: November 2012

  • Dystopian story.

        As the future queen of England walked down the carpet reserved for royalty, the gunshot was heard officially symbolizing the start of the lighting of the official 2032 Olympic torch. Shortly after the queen followed the Olympians. First, the sprinters, then the archers, then the queens 5th battalion snipers, (to be precise they were the Irish guards).  Then, it came…

  • Complex sentences (homework)

    1) The man would bleed to death unless someone helped him. 2) The child had to wait until his father came home. 3) Considering the status of the peasant he had no right to argue with the queen.

  • Subordinate clauses

    It was a bright cold day in April.  The clocks were striking 13 Winston smith tried to  avoid the wind.   He quickly slipped into the doors of victory mansions.  Not Quickly enough to escape a lot of dust and wind entering along with him.

  • Blog introduction

    Hi guys, this is Rahim from 7w1s and welcome to my edutronic blog.  Each time I write a piece of writing that I think deserves to go onto my blog I will post it.  My interests are playing video games and building Lego and mecanno.  I hope you enjoy all the pieces of  Writing I…