It was a bright cold day in April. The clocks were striking 13 Winston smith tried to avoid the wind. He quickly slipped into the doors of victory mansions. Not Quickly enough to escape a lot of dust and wind entering along with him.
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Hi Rahim.
Remember, because your job was to break the paragraph into simple sentences, you will need to use the proper sentence punctuation. This is where you start each sentence with a capital letter, and finish it with a full-stop. Can you go back and fix that?
Also – “Though not quickly enough to escape a whirlwind of dust..” is still a complex sentence. Can you think how you might be able to break it down into still smaller parts.
Mr Waugh
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