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The ecology of the planet collapsed this led to the Thames running dry. the citizens ignored the warning signs, all Hope was lost.

What methods does William Shakespeare use to keep the audience interested in his play Macbeth?

This essay seeks to examine how Shakespeare captures the interest and imagination of his audience using a range of dramatic devices. Some of the devices will be examined in further detail throughout the course of this essay.  These will include pathetic… Continue Reading →

Dystopian story.

    As the future queen of England walked down the carpet reserved for royalty, the gunshot was heard officially symbolizing the start of the lighting of the official 2032 Olympic torch. Shortly after the queen followed the Olympians. First, the sprinters, then the archers, then the queens 5th battalion snipers, (to be precise they were the Irish guards).  Then, it came the thing that the entire nation of England dreaded, the alien race that came every Olympics to collect a large sum of money.  The whole English nation depended on this unknown alien race.  The aliens made a rather destructive entrance as  they had a mass destruction double barrel laser cannon attached to the bottom of the shiny, metallic ship.  The queen was young and agile and little did the citizens of England know that she did gymnastics, the alien gunship was approaching fast.  Finally the gunship's laser burnt straight through the red carpet.  The  queen, that did gymnastics gracefully evaded the laser and jumped to the side.   Unfortunately for the servants that followed the queen, got burnt to a pulp and as the laser passed through them you could the screams of pain as the servants skin was burnt and continuously cooled by the cold air as the stadium was right beside the south bank.  The queens snipers started to fire at the ship, as some of the aliens were looking out of the airtight windows by smashing them and the sticking their heads out as the queens snipers had an extremely precise aim they were Shooting aliens in the head, as the bullets hit the aliens in the head, green blood streamed from the heads of the alien. Back at the Olympic stadium the air smelt of  burning petrol and the sweet aroma of burning bones and skin (the aroma was only sweet to the remaining aliens).  By the time the queen had reached Buckingham palace the snipers had killed most of the aliens there were only 2 aliens remaining the chief alien and the alien who was navigating the ship.  As the chief alien didn't use his brain very often, he decided to rappel out of the ships window and as you can imagine this made him an extremely easy target.  Finally, the ship veered to the right and then to the left and finally, sank in the river Thames.  If some one was brave enough to dive into the Thames the would find a great amount of these unknown alien ships, only one ship could be enough to answer the queries of citizens of London. one day the queen decided to let divers dive into the Thames to find an alien ship as the divers approached the bed of the Thames the water seemed to become more murky the lower the divers got.as they touched down on the bed of the Thames a robotic jelly fish whiz zed past them after the sudden shock the divers remembered to regulate their breathing as they would need their oxygen to last them.  They set off a flare to let their crew to let down a hook to pull up a ship, these ships weighed tonnes and it would take muscle as well as mechanical power to lift the ship out of the water, as the ship was being hoisted up there was an immense force pulling the ship back down luckily the power of the crane pulley was only on 25% so the person in the cabin of the crane increased the power to 75%.  Eventually the ship was extracted from the ship.  Once the ship was extracted from the water it was taken to a research facility. In the research facility they discovered that the aliens were from a distant galaxy they also discovered that the ship was made from tungsten carbide.  This was a material that was unknown to man so what they did was they cleaned up the ship and and they cut the ship into pieces. since there was a riot going on due to the rise in taxes that most civilians couldn't pay. The people in the research facility immediately started an experimental programme to make the most elite, agile and strong cyber soldier, the experiment was code named the spartan project, the finished project would be code named spartan f-177.  2 years after genetically modifying a human they finally solved the issue of the human going on a killing spree. After the experiment was finally over, they made a suit using the tungsten carbide they retrived from the space ship on the back of the suit they installed a jet pack and on the outside of the thighs 2 pistol holsters. After the suit had been created they put him through the most difficult training they had to offer, this involved escaping heat-seeking missiles, disabling laser tripwires,  how to conduct interigation and finally free running. After he had completed his training multiple times with outstanding results, he was ready he was then taken to America to group with America to group up with America's cyborg seal team-6.  They then were taken to the alien hive, they then had to infiltrate it they had found that at the bottom there was and emergency escape, after locating the door they then used plasma cutters to make a hole in the door big enough for them to fit themselves and all their equipment canisters.  They had to navigate through a series of dark corridors, every corridor they passed they placed a block of plastic explosive and a torch so they could find their way out.    

    As the future queen of England walked down the carpet reserved for royalty, the gunshot was heard officially symbolizing the start of the lighting of the official 2032 Olympic torch. Shortly after the queen followed the Olympians. First, the sprinters, then the… Continue Reading →

Complex sentences (homework)

1) The man would bleed to death unless someone helped him. 2) The child had to wait until his father came home. 3) Considering the status of the peasant he had no right to argue with the queen.

Subordinate clauses

It was a bright cold day in April.  The clocks were striking 13 Winston smith tried to  avoid the wind.   He quickly slipped into the doors of victory mansions.  Not Quickly enough to escape a lot of dust and… Continue Reading →

Blog introduction

Hi guys, this is Rahim from 7w1s and welcome to my edutronic blog.  Each time I write a piece of writing that I think deserves to go onto my blog I will post it.  My interests are playing video games… Continue Reading →

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